Okay, good, now I have your attention. You clicked on the link, you are reading this...there is no turning back now. I need your help. Yes. Yours.
You see, I'm trying to put together a book proposal for my novel, The Stump of the Terebinth Tree, and I need to include a logline (my book described in a single sentence). I've written dozens of them and I'm having trouble figuring out which one I should use.
Yep. I need you to help me choose which logline to use. Below I have pasted four loglines that may or may not be any good. I want you to pick your favorite and then comment below, telling me which one it is. It doesn't matter if you know nothing about loglines. It doesn't matter if you don't write books...or even read them. I just want to know which one draws your attention the most. So here they are:
- A young desert elf, fighting to save his people from a tyrannical ruler possessed by evil itself, uncovers a prophecy linked to an ancient terebinth tree – and the promise of deliverance.
- A young desert elf finds his faith and courage as he battles to save his homeland from a tyrant possessed by evil itself.
- Chosen to assassinate a possessed usurper, a young desert elf must rely on blind faith and friendship to defeat the enemy before his entire world is enslaved.
- Battling demonic forces in order to save his people from bondage, a young desert elf risks losing his family, faith, and sanity.
What do you think? Do any of them trigger your curiosity and make you want to read the book? If so, please comment it's number below. If you didn't like any of them, then comment that. I'm serious. It will not hurt my feelings. I would really welcome the honesty. If you didn't see one that stood out to you, but you have an idea for a better one, please comment it. I really need help. Please do not leave this page without leaving a comment! There is no wrong choice, no wrong suggestion. Just your honest opinion. Any comments you have would be much appreciated. =) Thank you!